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Half-Breed is back!

Two and a half years… being away from writing for such a long time was waaay to long, and I am really sorry for that. I am especially sorry to those who were following the adventures of Kyaara, Tianna, Rhyeesh and all the other characters of my Dominion’s Chain’s Half-Breed story arc. Reasons for my overdue absence are manifold, so it doesn’t make sense to name all of them. There were a bunch of real life issues and health issues I had to deal with, as well as with being overloaded with work from my self employment; you might imagine that trying to force oneself to sit in front of a computer screen after having spent 10+ hours in front of other computer screens is futile in most of the cases.

In contrast to previous statements in various comments, I am back for real and I promise to do my best to keep the Half-Breed ball rolling. I will not promise that I can post new chapters on a regular basis, but I do promise that there won’t be another unheralded out-of-scale hiatus. If I need to have another break from writing because of what-so-ever reason, I’ll make sure to communicate this to my fan base propperly.

Another important thing I’d like to mention is that our editor and proofreader has left the team unfortunately. For me, this is a very problematic issue, because I am not a native English speaker and having an editor and proofreader is vital for my writing. Since it is quite hard to find a proofreader who has the time and is willing to deal with hardcore stuff like our kinky Dominion’s Chain world, I have decided to post my new chapter as it is. I’m sure there are a lot of grammer and spelling issues, so please have mercy on me. As soon as we have another editor at hand, my new chapters will be revised.

I’d like to mention that I have commissioned new Half-Breed artwork from my fellow buddy Lucien. The latest one does show a glimpse of things to come in future Half-Breed chapters. You can find the original artwork on his HF-gallery, so please don’t forget to give him some love. 😉

At last, you can find some new world information about our Dominion’s Chain world:
The Wanderers of SajaRuun (scroll down)
Magic

That’s it for now! I hope you enjoy reading Part One of my lastest Half-Breed chapter…

– Dawn2069MS

11 comments

  1. Hi there. The new site is looking all good so far. Bye, bye Blogger, I won’t miss you.

    But I have a suggestion: Would it be possible for you to open a tumblr account where you announce new chapters? I’m not sure if I’m alone with this, but it would help me keeping track

  2. Place looks spiffy so far. Also gotta say that the Side Quests section has me curious to see what comes of it. Will there be more of these off shoots to the main stories, or are they a one time deal? Moreover, is Spire the only arc with such side quests planned?

    Personally, I’d like to see more side stories, but that’s just because I like large stories with lots of characters and varying plots. Helps keep things fresh, I think.

    Anyway, all looks great so far. Looking forward to seeing where you guys plan to take things from here.

    1. thanks Gamov!! Nice to see familiar faces again :)

      I hope to have more side quests in the future. This is a bit of an experiment.

      For Spire of Torment, there might be more side quests in the future. I have a few ideas that could work I think.

      I can’t say for sure with Shackles or Half-Breed because they’re aren’t mine 😀

      Maybe Wolf and Dawn can chime in.

      1. There’s certainly the possibility of side-quests emerging from Shackles of Hate. I’ve had an idea or two. But for the moment I have no plans to personally write it. I don’t want to take away time from the main arc.

      2. Since I had this super long break from writing, I want to focus on the Half-Breed story arc. There are a lot of parts to cover, starting with the DalMarkaan invasion, up to the adventures of the Wanderers of SajaRuun.

        And yes: I AM BACK !!!

      3. Personally, I like the Side Quests. I’m a new reader.

        I’m aware this site has existed for years in some form or another, but I only started reading since last week. The side quests for Spire drew me in. The exhaustive list of chapters is… daunting. I read the FAQ and saw you’re doing a GoT-esque work with at least 3 separate threads and lots of interweaving characters and plots.

        And judging by how short the chapters seem to be, plot/characters are really important. With the sprawling cast, I’m not very inclined to read much because I’d have to start at the beginning and read through to the end. Rotating stories chapter by chapter is really tedious and complicated.

        Furthermore, the earlier chapters have lots and lots of mistakes. Whether mechanical or grammatical, it seems your strength is (or was) in painting pictures. Writing good stories is a completely different beast. It’s not a cultural thing, either. As an American, I didn’t notice any strong British influences that were immediately noticeable.

        That said, the later chapters seem to be about average as far as porn lit goes. The art is pretty. I can be patient with updates, as a writer myself–with a full time job–I certainly take a little too much time to get work done.

        Is it possible you could put in summaries every dozen chapters or so, to catch people up on what’s happening if they might have missed something?

        I saw in a side quest that Aeltha got swallowed by a tentacle monster and sucked into a pocket dimension, and the chapter it takes place in is placed BEFORE other chapters where she’s walking around. Maybe I’m misreading or misunderstanding something, but it looks to me like there’s huge continuity errors… everywhere.

        There’s another author I read on literotica, GigglingGoblin. She has a similar writing style: she has a few characters and writes out different events at different stages in their lives. She’s kind enough to say, “this takes place before this one, but after that one.”

        Would you consider doing something like that?

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